first revisal

例句：

1. 1. The first revision of the proposal was due to be submitted tomorrow.
   提案的第一次修订将于明天提交。
2. 2. The author revised the manuscript several times before submitting it for publication.
   作者在提交出版前对手稿进行了几次修订。
3. 3. The team worked hard on their first revision of the report before presenting it to the client.
   团队在向客户展示报告之前，对他们的报告进行了第一次修订。